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Warrior Cats Fan Fic Chapter 4 Part 2 Moonkit gulped. Her heart was still pounding from the surprise of the bear. And because of Cougarstar's question. "Umm... Y-yes sir." She stuttered. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Bearclan leader remembered the prophecy the old, blind cat in Starclan had told him at the Moon Tree. "The wild berries that ripen with clean water, will become the bitterest or all." The old siamese's fur stood on end. A long pause went in between Moonkit's quiet confession and Cougarstar's response. "Explain."~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The tabby kit inhaled deeply, her fur pricked up. She looked down at her paws. "I left the camp. I... Um... Accidently trampled through some berries and, I... Uh..." The small she-kit was on the verge breaking down into sobs. "I think I lead the bear here." She meowed a little louder than she wanted to.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cougarstar looked down at the small furry kit. Berries. On her paws. He thought. <i>